I enjoyed the story, however, typos abound. At a few points I had to stop to decipher what it should read. I don’t know if I will pay for book 2 if this is the precursor of what I will have to deal with.

Where do I begin? I think one of the most obnoxious things about this book is all the caddy and immature dialogue. I did not make it to the end and I do not recommend this book.

The story idea is good. But the grammar is so poor it is distracting and hard to read. This book needs to be seriously edited.

The story was amazing. And I love the characters the chemistry is steamy. But the grammar and spelling needs to be edited. I gave the book 4 stars for the story.

The book wasn’t bad, just lots of spelling and other confusing errors. I highly recommend an editor. Watch this author, they will go places with the right team.

The story line is entertaining, a little predictable but it kept me interested enough to keep reading. i would have liked more involvement of the wolves after they were introduced, especially the pups since several specific comments were made, including Lucas’ softness toward them. I’d like more backstory about Sarah’s previous interactions with some of the other pack members before being exiled since they seemed to know her so well. I’d also like more scenes showing how Sarah and Lucas have bonded emotionally. The lack of editing is obvious less than halfway through the first chapter. Missing words, misspelled words, typos, grammatical errors, etc. if this type of thing really irritates you, don’t bother reading.