Warriors Super Edition: Crookedstar's Promise

A TRUE SUPER EDITION MASTERPIECE!!!! ~ ✨ Starflame of GalaxyClan ✨

I see a connection between the mothers of Bluestar, Yellowfang, and Crookedstar. Bluestar’s mother is named Moonflower, Yellowfang’s mother is named Brightflower, and Crookedstar’s mother is named Rainflower. Very strange in my opinion. Welp, byeee -MeowFlameKitty

Haven’t read the book but PLEASE I JUST WANT TO FIND REVIEWS ABOUT THE BOOK PLEASE STOP YAPPING ABOUT YOUR OCS

Can anyone tell me why in this book Crookedstar’s mother is named Rainflower, but in all other books she is called Lilystem? Thanks- Ravensight 😊

Stormkit edged farther along the slippery branch. Volekit’s dare rang in his ears. Bet you fall off before you get to the end! He unsheathed his claws and dug them into the frozen bark. From here’s

Sunrisekit excitedly ran around SunClans camp. Her mother, Sunbush, was watching them fondly. She had two sisters, Frostkit and Snowkit. They were play-fighting currently. “Hey, you two, stop acting like kits! We’ll be apprentices any day now.” Sunbush was over to her kits in a flash. “Sunrisekit! Let your sisters play a game!” Sunbush scolded. “You’ll have to have a talk with your father!” Sunrisekit shuddered. “No, thank you!” She cried. “I’d rather not.” Sunbush rose her head upwards. “Fallfang!” Cried Sunbush, flattening her ears. But, then, Grassstar interrupted the punishment. “Today, two kits will become apprentices!” Mossfur, the deputy, ran over to sit under the rock besides the medicine cat, Ivyvine. Sunleap, Fallfang, Suncall, and Sunsquirrel sat under the rock, but giving the deputy and medicine cat some room. After everybody gathered, Grassstar started the ceremony. “Some kits have reached six moons! From now on, until these kits earn their warrior names, they shall be known as Sunrisepaw, Frostpaw, and Snowpaw! Sunrisepaw’s mentor is Splashstream, Frostpaw’s is Leoparddusk, and Snowpaw’s is Blackear! Meeting dismissed!” Sorry if chapter was too long. Next chapter in Yellowfangs Secret. -Feathermist

“I say this words before the Cave Of Stars so they may hear it and approve. From now on DuneKit will be known as DunePaw and WoodenKit WoodenPaw. CirclingHawk will mentor WoodenKit and DryTear will mentor DunePaw,” CamelStar mewed touching his muzzle to each of the two cats before their mentors padded up and touched their new apprentice. “Go in and spend the night with SpiritClan, let them teach you for one night and one night only before you spend 5 moons with your mentor. Both of you.” Together the two padded into the cave with CirclingHawk and DryTear. “Hello,” A sweet voice mewed. Swiveling his head he saw two cats. A brown she cat with a white muzzle and a Blue she cat who was staring at them with an icy and hostile glare. “We’ve been expecting you. My name is Kindle and this is my friend Lake. Come over here and press your body against the wall. SpiritClan will meet you.” Kindle mewed nodding to the wall beside her. DunePaw stumbled over. All of this was happening in a rush. He didn’t want to do this. DunePaw wanted to be home with his father and his new mate. Not some stupid guardian and SpiritClan! WoodenPaw nodded and settled down closing her eyes. DunePaw did the same. Her short hair brushing against the wall. “Hello DunePaw!” A voice cried. Opening his eyes he saw he was in a Rain forest. “Who are you?” He asked, narrowing his eyes at the dark brown and sandy colored she. “My name is AspinFlight. And this is my mate GreenStar,” She mewed. “Follow us. We have been chosen to train you tonight,” Quickly scrambling to his paws he darted after them. “Down this tunnel we can quickly climb to the desert,” GreenStar said pointing the tip of his tail at a dark tunnel. “Ok,” DunePaw nodded. 𝓘'𝓶 𝓷𝓸𝓽 𝓰𝓸𝓲𝓷𝓰 𝓭𝓸𝔀𝓷. 𝓝𝓸 𝔀𝓪𝔂 𝓲𝓷 𝓢𝓹𝓲𝓻𝓲𝓽𝓒𝓵𝓪𝓷! He thought fearfully. “Yes you are, follow behind me but in front of AspinFlight,” GreenStar hissed slithering down the tunnel. “I-Ok…” DunePaw gulped following. It was only a few seconds under ground before they burst up. “Wow,” AspinFlight gasped. “I haven’t been here in forever, I’ve usually stayed in the rain forest,” She turned to him. “Watch what me and GreenStar do, the copy it,” Nodding DunePaw sat down. GreenStar crouched before springing at his mate. Twisting in the air he landed on top of her as she moved to the side. “Gotcha,” He purred moving away to let her up. “My turn!” DunePaw mewed jumping up and rushing over. “Ok try,” AspinFlight mewed. He crouched then lept twisting in the air his forepaws sprang out and he landed neatly. “Perfect,” Purred a voice. Turning he saw a dark red she with a white tail. “Who are you?” DunePaw asked. “Hold on let me get rid these cats. They aren’t supposed to be here,” Flicking her paws the two cats turned to dust and flew away. “My name is WhiteTail, but if you want to see me again tell me and I’ll appear in your dreams,” WhiteTail hissed before dissolving. “Ok…” DunePaw mewed before waking up. Something was wrong.

I’m actually gonna organize these for once :] 🟢 - Open 🔴 - Taken ⚫️ - 2+ people want this cat I’m organizing by gender and age/rank ~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~•~• Kits 🚺 Wren - Loner 🔴 (taken by Tigress) Age: 5 moons Desc: A light brown tabby she-kit with a cream underbelly and tail tip, yellow eyes Personality: Kind, caring, and trusting, will give everybody a chance Bunny’kit - Clan kit 🔴 (taken by Dew’foot) Age: 3 moons Desc: An extremely fluffy white she-kit with a few barely visible light gray spots, and a very short fluffy tail; her fur is very soft 🥹🥹🥹 Personality: A sweet, selfless she who will always be there for her friends and loves making others happy Sadie - Kittypet 🟢 Age: 4 moons Desc: An extremely tiny white she-kit with white patches, green eyes Personality: A bold, playful she-kit who tends to be reckless and is good at bringing "gifts” home (ex. mice, birds, etc.) Kits 🚹 Danny - Loner 🔴 (taken by Tigress) Age: 5 moons Desc: A muscular cream tabby tom with blue eyes and a white chest patch Personality: An eager to learn, lovable tom who is good at fighting despite his age Sun’kit - clan kit 🔴 (taken by Dew’foot) Age: 2 moons Desc: A yellow tom with white tabby stripes and white paws, green eyes Personality: An optimistic yet slightly self centered tom who is very good at annoying older cats Apprentices 🚺 Mio - kittypet 🔴 (taken by Sunset’splash) Age: 9 moons Desc: A pitch black solid she-cat with dark blue eyes and a two colored nose Personality: A clever she-cat who sometimes feels restless and impatient, thinks through every decision carefully Sakura’paw - clan cat🔴 (taken by Sunset’splash) Age: 6 moons Desc: A light cream she-cat with lighter paws and ears, pale blue eyes Personality: A quiet, easily embarrassed she who absolutely hates getting wet and is very picky Alison - kittypet 🟢 Age: 8 moons Desc: A black she-cat with dark brown eyes and a white muzzle, short fur Personality: Very serious, over worker, easily annoyed she-cat who is very quiet. Very very smart. Apprentices 🚹 Elk’paw - clan cat 🔴 (taken by Dew’foot) Age: 8 moons Desc: A dark brown tom with lighter legs, white tail, dark brown eyes Personality: A reckless tom who tends to do ridiculous and/or dangerous things just for attention Borage’paw - clan cat (med app.) 🔴 (taken by Dew’foot) Age: 8 moons Desc: A light gray tabby tom with a torn ears and light blue eyes Personality: An easily annoyed tom who gets jealous a lot and hates the cats he is jealous of, will do terrible things to them sometimes. Warriors 🚺 Crystal’shine -clan cat (med)🟢 Age: 28 moons Desc: A white she-cat with light gray splotches and beautiful blue eyes Personality: Kind, caring she-cat who loves caring for those weaker than her Taria -loner 🔴 (taken by Sunset’splash) Age: 11 moons Desc: A dark brown tabby she-cat with an extremely bushy tail, and brown eyes Personality: Likes joking around, can be dirty-minded and is a great therapist and overall a good friend Taria’s all yours Sunset. Fun fact she is based off of one of my friends.

Chapter three: After a while I kind of grew in the clan. I became an apprentice that honestly I’m not sure what apprentice I’m meant to be. Sometimes I am helping out Ravenheart, most of the time I’m a warrior apprentice. Now it’s the day of my warrior ceremony. “Im so excited!!” I exclaimed to Heartpaw. “Same…” She hesitated. “What’s wrong with you?” I asked narrowing my eyes. “Well I don’t want to be a warrior I want to be a kitty pet!” She whispered. I gasped. So loud everyone turned to me. I looked around and was about to spill everything when my mentor, Whiskleaf glared at me to sit and listen. After a while everyone was sharing younger again. “Alright it’s time for your warrior assessment!” Willowtoe said. She was Wishes mentor. Yeah Wish and Field were so disrespectful that they declined new names. “Yay!” I exclaimed and ran ahead. “Slow down!” Whiskleaf said. She’s nice just sometimes a bit to strict. I looked back and waited for them. “Alright you all are doing this separate. Remember we are always watching.” Whiskleaf said. I nodded and dashed off. I caught tons of prey. Once we got back to camp everyone else was already back. “Sorry we got caught up because she was chasing a rabbit halfway across the forest.” Whiskleaf smiled. “It’s alright.” Treestar said. He turned to Heartpaw first. •Oh no not her first!• Luckily his gaze passed her and went straight to me. He did the whole ceremony with Heartpaw last. After he asked if she had learned the warrior code her mentor said yes and then he turned to Heartpaw. “Heartpaw do you promise to-“ He was cut off by Heartpaw. “I don’t want to be a warrior!” She cried. “I want to be a kittypet!” She looked at her paws once she was finished and she saw everyone looking at her. I came up to Heartpaw. I laid my tail across her back. And rested my muzzle on hers. “It’s okay. Everyone has a different life and that’s okay.” I soothed. “It’s not that this is normal or that it’s very respectful after everything we’ve done for you. But you choose a different life path for you. Not for anyone else.” I finished and smiled sadly at her. She was leaving. And so far she was m in only friend. But she wants to live with two legs and that’s okay. “Really?” She looked up at me tears rolling off her face. I nodded. “Really.” I had calmed her down for the ‘Get out of river clan’ part so she wouldn’t feel as ashamed. She looked at the clan and I could feel her guilt deepening again. “I don’t understand why but, Featherwish was right. Now please get out of my camp.” He had a hint of anger in his voice. Heartpaw flinched and with her head hanging she left the camp and never looked back. Chapter four: Featherwhisker smiled down at her adopted kits. Heartpaw now Daisy, had given me her kits so she couldn’t get close to them and then lose them to other twoleg nests. They all believed that she was their real mother. Except that the clan was really weary with them because they all thought that they would ditch Riverclan for twolegs. I flashed my tail at Blazewing who was glaring at the kits. “What did I say.” I growled in his ear. He flinched. “Never be rude to the kits.” He whispered in a scared voice. Every cat knew that she was super over protective of her friends kits and told everyone that if they were mean to them I would scratch their ears off. I proved it by scratching some across their side because they were in a tree hanging Brookkit over and was about to drop her when I looked up and glared at him. He quickly jumped down and handed Brookkit to me. I scratched his side telling everyone to be kind or I will hurt you. Brookkit came up to her. “Mommy Dropkit is being mean! He said that we’re just idiotic half clan cats.” She cried. “Is it true?” She looked at me with question in her eyes. I bent down next to her. “You are perfect just the way you are don’t listen to them it doesn’t matter who is your mother or father. All that matters is that you are you.” I licked her ears and quickly shot my head up as Waterkit cried out. “Mommy! He scratched my face!!” Waterkit came running with blood dripping down his face. “Who?” I almost screeched. “Redpaw.” He was so quiet that no one except me could hear him. “I’ll take care of it go play with your siblings.” I murmured and licked the scratch clean. He looked happier now. “Okay!” He ran off to join his littermates. “Redpaw.” I glared down at the apprentice who was shivering. “I-it was an accident! I was b-battle training and he got in the way!” He managed to stammer. “Alright.” I growled. “I’ll believe it this one time.” I turned and walked away. Chapter five: It took everyone a while to get used to my kits being apprentices and me not being so overprotective of them. It was leaf bare when I caught green cough. But it quickly turned into red cough. W-what’s happening?” I squinted. It had been a moon since I caught red cough. “You did not survive red cough.” I recognized that voice. “Treestar!” I purred. He had died in green leaf to a battle. I smiled. But then I realized what he said. “No but I’m to young!” I cried. “Your adopted kits are apprentices and you should be happy that no body killed any of them. You’re new leader ordered everyone to kill them when they were kits and since they survived to apprentices they are okay now.” He smiled. “Oh alright.” I murmured. I was still crying. That was terrible but I’m glad it’s over now. Many moons later my kits and Daisy joined me in starclan. This book is done bye ✌️ ~Darkfall of Au Skyclan~

Rainflower Rainflower Rainflower Rainflower So yes I only hate Rainflower

Could I have BunnyKit, SunKit, ElkPaw and BoragePaw? ~DewFoot of CloudClan

I want Wren and Danny please! -Tigress

CHAPTER 10 ____________ GrayWillow shot up, and ran out of the den. Another nightmare. That’s when she remembered moons and moons ago, there was going to be a fourtrees clan meet. She guessed it was canceled. Then, the CloudClan deputy, LeapFlower, walked over to GrayWillow. “GrayWillow, you will be on this morning’s patrol.” She said, “You must go at sunhigh.” GrayWillow nodded. “Oh, and good luck out there.” LeapFlower said. GrayWillow left the den entrance and went to the medicine den to greet MistyLeaf. As she was trotting over she tripped on a violet flower. She picked it up in her jaws, stood up, and continued walking to the medicine cat's den. She casually walked in and greeted the handsome spotted medicine cat. “Hello MistyLeaf. I brought you this.” She set the beautiful violet in front of him. “Thank you, I’ll add it to the herb spot.” He said. GrayWillow smiled and walked out of the den. She stared up at the sky after exiting the medicine den and saw sunhigh had started. So she went to the front of the warriors den and met the warriors she will be going with. “Hello GrayWillow! Im DawnFoot.” Said the long, short haired, she with fully sky blue eyes. Her paw was completely black, and her pelt ginger. “I'm Lightpetal!” Said a light tan and white she. “I’m MoonClaw.” The third cat said, absently. It was a almost black cat with deep blue eyes. “Whi- wait, WillowPaw?!” Gasped a white haired she with bright blue eyes and black spots. It was WhitePelt. “What are you doing here?!” She hissed. “I’m a warrior. I have been for two nights! How did you not know that?!”GrayWillow said. “You missed me!” Said a tan and brown tom. “Oh, sorry, you are?” GrayWillow asked. “I’m SplashStorm, nice to meet ya!” He said. “Well, shall we go?” DawnFoot asked. “Yes, we should.” Whitepelt said. But of course, bad things have to happen every time GrayWillow isn’t near the camp's safety. Next time, maybe she won’t be so lucky. As they trotted out of the camp, GrayWillow heard a noise. “Stop.” She said. Everyone froze, and she walked over to the bush. Just a rabbit. Then she heard more russiling coming from the other way. She turned around and went to the other side. She expected it to be another rabbit, so she stepped foward casually. But instead of a rabbit, it was a cat facing the other way. Her fur bristled, and then the cat turned around. “Oh, Hello WillowPaw. Just hunting.” She hadn’t regonized the cat, but the cat knew her. “Oh, ok I’ll leave you be.” GrayWillow said. She turned around, and immediately after she did, the cat pounced on her back. “Mee oww!” GrayWillow screeched. They tumbled out of the bushes, right in front of the patrol. “GrayWillow!” Cried LightPetel. She jumped on the unknown warrior, and bit hardly into her shoulder. The cat hissed, and bit into LightPetel. LightPetel felt a rush of anger and bit as hard as she possibly could into the neck of the warrior. The warrior shrieked and let go of LightPetel. LightPetel gasped. GrayWillow looked at the warrior, whose body was twitching, and her eyes filled with pain. And then, she looked at LightPetel, tears at the edges of her eyes, that where as large as baseballs. The warrior stopped moving. All of the cats went over to see, except for LightPetel. “This cat is not a warrior, too small. Must be an apprentice.” DawnFoot said. The cat had not moved an inch ever since they came over. Obviously had been knocked out. “G..g..get out of the way.” Everyone turned around to see LightPetel. She walked over and set her ear down over to the cats chest. She lifted her head and her ears dropped. “N-no h..heartbeat..” She said. She turned around, worry all over her face. “You killed an apprentice! You murderer! You broke the code!” WhitePelt spat. “I..I’m sorry.. I just wanted t..to help GrayWillow.” LightPetel studdered. “You little! She didn’t need help!” Whitepelt yelled. “I said I’m sorry!” LightPetel cried. “That’s still not enough! You killed someone!” Whitepelt continued to yell. “Leave her alone, Whitepelt. Let’s just tell the leader what happened.” GrayWillow said. “No please!” LightPetel said. WhitePelts eyes lit up and she ran back to camp. “Wait up!” DawnFoot said. She ran behind WhitePelt. Once they where gone, GrayWillow stepped over to LightPetel. “Hey, it’s not your fault, it’s no one’s fault,” GrayWillow said. “It IS my fault!” LightPetel cried. “StarClan decides what happens, not you. Whitepelt has gotten to your head. Now let’s head back to camp, it’s getting dark.” GrayWillow said. “One moment. I’ll be right behind you.” LightPetel said. GrayWillow nodded and turned around. She stood up and ran back to camp. At the entrance of the camp Blackstar stood, next to WhitePelt- wearing her fake frown. “GrayWillow, I need to talk to you for a moment.” Blackstar said, “Come with me.” GrayWillow walked to Blackstars den with him. They both sat down at the entrance. “What do you want to talk about, BlackStar?” GrayWillow said. “I’ve heard from WhitePelt-“ WhitePelt! “That when you were on a patrol there was a little incident.” He meowed. “Were you.. killed an apprentice.” He said. GrayWillows heart dropped. That’s not true! I didn’t kill it! “But I-“ “No buts. You’ve broken the warrior code, young warrior, or should I say, WillowPaw.” He finished. GrayWillows eyes widened with shock. “But, i-it w-wasn’t me! It was Ligh- i mean, an accident!” GrayWillow stammered, trying to tell him what happened without upsetting LightPetel. “WhitePelt is lying! There was never any death! I..” she trailed off. “Enough!“ Blackstar yelled, silencing GrayWillow. “Enough of all your lies. Whitepelt would never lie, she’s a great warrior. I trust her.” “But-“ GrayWillow tried to continue. “GrayWillow. You are no longer a true warrior. If you keep messing up, and keep killing. I might have to even exclude you from the clan.” Blackstar finally finished. ^Yellowfangs secret^ ~WhisperSong~

WolfpackBubba: you should write a story! I would totally read it! Sunset: I SHIP THISTLEFEATHER!!! (Doeheart is Ivywhisker’s grandmother’s name lol) #tHiStLeFeAtHeR 4 LiFe I love your fanfic so much!! Splashpaw tho lol Yea, sAAAAAME! I literally died from all the bad choices Crooked was making. For some reason he was my favorite leader when I started reading the series and still is. :D Ivywhisker of AU ThunderClan OR (sneak peek!) Calla the kittypet/loner

Now For #3! Ah, yes. Finally I add the 3rd. (Leave a rating telling me if you want me to do a book!) Name: Lillyfur Gender: Male Clan: TC Mate: Gingerfur Notes: Lillyfur was friends with some of the most famous cats as an apprentice. He was freshly-apprenticed when Rusty, a kitty pet, came to the clan. The other apprentices ridiculed Firepaw, but he was friends with Graypaw, and “any friend of Graypaw is a friend of mine” according to him. Popular as an apprentice, he could have take some of the cutest she-cats on the market. Many cats have no idea what he saw in Gingerfur, but according to him, her personality “matched her looks perfectly. Sweet, with a splash of fire.” They currently have two, healthy, trouble making kits, Mosskit and Finchkit.

Ivy, brightheart didn’t die as a apprentice or kit so I won’t make her a warrior. Mistyfox, I’m still thinking it over if to make dandelionkit and juniperkit warriors. What book did they die? Name: SwiftTail Mate: None Kits: none Gender: Tom Pelt: Black and white with amber eyes (I think) Clans: Thunderclan,starclan Death: Killed honorable in battle against rouges. Prophecies delivered: None Age when died: 135 moons. He refused to retire to the elders den Name: Seedripple Gender: she-cat Mate: bumblestripe (after he got rejected by dovewing) Kits: Fallkit- a black white and orange Tom with gray paws and blue eyes- spiritkit- a light brown she-cat with black stripes and amber eyes- frostkit- a white she-cat with the lightest gray paws and amber eyes- and flowerkit- a cream she-cat with a white tail tip and green eyes. Looks like: a golden-brown she-cat with blue eyes Clans: Thunderclan, windclan, starclan Death: slain by tallclaw of the darkforest while protecting her kits in the final hour Age when died: 19 moons old and a queen Prophecies delivered: 1 to bumblestripe !!!! New thing! Death scenes now addded!!!! Name: snowdrop Gender: Tom Mate: silverstream. (Graystripe drowned in the river and snowdrop tried to save him but silverstream dragged snowdrop out) Kits: forgottenkit- a light silver she-cat with speckles of white across her tail- pigeonkit- a dark dark silver to, Tom with amber eyes like his sister- pinekit- a white Tom with freckles of dark silver across his muzzle and blue eyes like his mother- and derangedkit- a pure white Tom with green eyes, he has Down syndrome. Looks like: pure white Tom with blue eyes Clans: Thunderclan, starclan. Death: during a flood while visiting Riverclan with bluestar he got his paw stuck under a rock and couldn’t escape. His kits watched him drown painfully. Age when died: 32 moons Prophecies delivered: 5 to thunderclan Snowdrops death scene: He licked his paw while listening to bluestar and crookedstar mew. “Flood! Flood!” Some cat screeched loudly. Snowdrop looked up. The water was already high and so dark he could see his paws. Bluestar streaked past him and out of the camp. Snowdrop followed but suddenly he fell. His hind leg was stuck under a rock! The water was getting higher. “Help! Help!” He yowled loudly. He held his muzzle higher. The water engulfed him and his paw came loose. He tumbled in the water. A large rock rolled above him. Snowdrop felt the rock drop on him. He couldn’t breath. “Help! Help!” His bubbly voice screamed in the water. It didn’t work. He felt himself himself breath finally. He sprang out of the water and towards the Riverclan cats and bluestar. “Bluestar! I’m alive!” Snowdrop mewed. She didn’t answer. “Snowdrop… where is he… momma?” A kit mewled. “I don’t know pigeonkit.” Silverstream answered. She gathered up the kits to keep them warm. “I’m right here.” He mewed to his mate. “ They can’t see you.” A cat said. He turned to see speckletail. He gasped. “ I thought… I thought you were dead. I guess I’m wrong.” He mewed rubbing his muzzle on his mothers ear. “I am dead. And so are you.” He stood there. As silent as he was he thought everyone can hear him. “Let me take you to starclan.” Snowdrop nodded and let his mother take him home.

I don’t know when Dandelionkit and Juniperkit died, but it mentions their deaths in Squirrelflight’s Hope and they were Squirrelflight’s kits and were littermates to Sparkfur and Alderheart. (I think that’s their names I forgot) they died shortly after being born. And also thank you for making Seedpaw a warrior! It made me so mad and sad when she died I’m Bramblestar’s Storm! ~Mapledawn (Mistyfox)

Name:ColdPool Looks:A white Tom with a black stripe on his tail. Rank:Deputy Gender:Tom Mother:Unknown Father:unknown Siblings:none Power:Can make ice change color.

OmggggGGGG!!!!! 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 I love it when RoseThorn saves Leopard! OMGoodness it’s soo sweeettttt!!! Also that is exactly how RoseThorn would be if she found a kit. Also the smol step-dad and step-daughter moment between MoonWater and RoseThorn when MoonWater praises her, I love! Rosie needs that bc her dad died when she was very little. She never had a dad. Also it’s nice to see the soft side of MoonWater once again, after reading Ivy’s fanfic I was kinda hating him……..but anyway! Bye! LilyHeart of AU ThunderClan MagnoliaHeart of DewClan Delta of the ShimmerWings