Moneyman

I’m not sure why I bothered, but somehow I made it to the end. The writing is shockingly poor. Pre-teens can do better. The author does not know the difference between lay and lie, stationary and stationery, past and passed, or who and whom. He puts commas in random places and seems only vaguely aware what punctuation is for. He bumbles on and on with useless observations that don’t advance the plot or develop the characters. At the end of one excrutiatingly banal and pointless paragraph he writes, “You get the idea.” Yeah, we got the idea about half an hour ago when you were describing the cheese and tomato sandwich you were making. Even the most indulgent and incompetent editor would get rid of half the text of the book. The plot is ridiculous. The outcome is a joke. This book is a complete waste of your time. Go do some exercise or write your own book instead of reading this junk.