The Swayback Horse

Not good. Too many grammatical errors. And I know why this book is free: it is 34 pages. I hope my review (and others) help you to decide whether you buy this book or not.

It is very short and I don’t like the ending. Why is the boys time with the horse so short. The prologue has nothing to do with the book I don’t understand it.

The story went absolutely nowhere. It was actually painful and difficult to read due to the constant run on sentences. Please find an editor who has passed basic English and creative writing classes.

I like cheese

Nice book

I didn't get the plot of the story.

I love the way you wrote the book. I love the horse and it is so cute and fun, I love how the horse is the color white.he was a good pony and I have a horse to. Is there any other books that you have wrote? This is a great way to go in to horse life. It was the best book ever.

This is a lovely story about a boy and his horse, and I loved it very much. But I have seen many errors with the sentences. Listen to this: I like my dog she is nice Daisy is super fun she plays all the time. That is what the sentences in this book sounded like. It should be: I like my dog, she is very nice. Daisy is super fun and she plays all the time. I am definitely not trying to be mean, just handing out some constructive criticism.

Not the best

These visions have undeveloped parallel possibilities. One idyllic coming of age, one horrific seeking self-understanding. The language and structure of the writing is still immature. A good editor/mentor might aid development. Even at this early stage, some foreshadowing of the conflict to come would be in order. So far, not worth reading.