I enjoyed the story, but not as much as the first of this series. It needs someone with a red pen to edit out about 100 pages. There's not enough plot for the length of the book, and there's plenty that should go. I do like the author, and she has good ideas, but a good editor could make this a five star book.

They just really need to fix the text of this book. It goes from regular text to bold text. Other than that I'm enjoying the series.