This concept is interesting but the writing itself is pretty rough— enough to not read the rest of the series. Everything is ‘the biggest’ or ‘the most’ or ‘the -est’ from the beginning, which makes it hard to build from there. There’s also a ton of word misuse which leads to a huge lack of clarity. I wanted to like it more but the reading experience was rough.

Exciting, great plotline. Fresh ideas. Really enjoyed it.