Taken

Good story, good characters. The typos were infuriating.

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Numerous misspellings and grammatical mistakes.

Good story. Horrible editing.

Just pass it by

I would have given this book 4.6 stars if not for the cringe worthy spelling/grammatical errors. Sometimes, I would have to reread a sentence just for it to make sense. If it had been properly proofread it would have been a great read. I am going to read the second book, and hopefully, the second book has been looked over by a professional editor & proofreader.

Book was okay. But there is so much misspelling and bad grammar. It drove me nuts! A good couple of hours read.

She gets kidnapped in the middle of the woods and they are just immediately into each other? The main character doesn’t even struggle to get away PLUS helps him steal live cattle that belongs to her family. I chose it because I just got done with another MC series and this shouldn’t even fall into that category. The worst part was they immediately have sex as soon as they get to his house within hours of meeting. There wasn’t even a build into the story for sexual tension between them besides him seeing her face? I think the author was trying to go for steamy and every girl’s fantasy but failed epically.

I kind a hate that hatchit was sort of a wimp.

First of all, I’d like you to know I didn’t finish this book. On top of all the errors in this book ~ probably one or two per page, some I had to reread to decipher and figure out what the author meant ~ I could not stand Elsie. She decides to get kidnapped and after losing her V card she suddenly starts this overly awkward and definitely annoying inner, I guess you’d say, argument between the old her and the new one.... WHAT????? Things flipped in such a weird way that I don’t know what happened. The writing was not good and the “old Elsie” vs “new Elsie” was childish, came out of nowhere, and was just annoying AF. THEN, after she’s been tied up in a warehouse for a little bit, maybe an hour or so, she decides she’s falling in love with the guy who not only kidnapped her, took her V card ~ given by her freely, I might add, which in itself was another weird moment ~ but he becomes angry and hostile she tells him her name, get this ~ the morning AFTER they slept together, who then calls his friend about it, then ends up tying her up, untying her, then driving her to the warehouse where he knows she’s going to be sold and only after he comes back in, without any keys for her shackles ~ great planning on his part, thought he was a Marine ~ then she thinks she’s falling for him. It’s not even been 24 hours... 🤦🏻‍♀️🙄 THEN she starts arguing, internally with “Old Elsie” and that’s when I had enough. There’s no way I’m even attempting the rest of this series.