Capital Bride
By Cynthia Woolf
- Release Date: 2012-12-10
- Genre: Western Romance
Description
Unexpectedly homeless, unwed mother Sarah Johnson has few options. They could go live with her cousin William, but Sarah believes there’s something untoward about his offer and it leaves her feeling uncomfortable. She's qualified to be a governess, but no one will have her because she wasn't married when she had her precious MaryAnn. Matchmaker & Co could be her salvation as mail-order-bride to Mr. John Atwood. <br>
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Single father, John Atwood, is raising his daughter the best he can in the wilds of the Colorado Territory but knows he needs help. No woman he knows wants to take on the raising of his daughter who hasn't spoken since she saw her mother brutally murdered during a bank robbery. Can Sarah, John and their two daughters overcome their pasts and find happiness together?
Reviews
Capital bride
1By dumcoftOnly a weird sex book. dcNice and beautiful
5By Skiplayer1Beautiful and romantic story with the innocence of two beautiful little girls. Lovely ending.A nice romantic read!
5By DWFREIDELLA wonderful book for just about anyone. EnjoyFilthy book
1By MimigramaI was shocked at the filthy sex scenes in this book. I was looking for a clean love story. I do not understand why any author feels the need to be so graphic. Would NOT recommend this book.Capital bride
4By MLM-5Sweet story.Review
2By My Passion Is ReadingDon’t waste your time with this book. The book really needs a good editor. The wording seems forced in some places and is too wordy in others. This story should have started with an prologue explaining Sarah’s relationship with her fiancé. Then the book should have started with her living with her Aunt. This book starts too abruptly. Also, in the beginning of the book Sarah greets her cousin, William, with a kiss on the cheek. She is very happy with his generosity towards her. Her reason for not marrying him is only because he is her cousin. Then later she is hostile towards him like he has treated her badly. This is very confusing. This book reads like a sweet historical romance, however, it has explicit sex scenes which seem to contrast with the rest of the book. The storyline isn’t bad, it just needs a good editor fix these issues. As it is, I don’t recommend reading it.Capital Bride Cynthia Woolf
3By avidreader4everAuthor is talented and weaves a story that draws you in but it was a little too wordy for me. I finished it,but not impressed enough to continue the series. I like historical romance, but was not a fan of this one.Capital bride
4By lobehA fun read.Capital Bride
5By Fan from AZA little too predictable although still a great read!Good read!
4By Poldark 43110A very good short story! I really enjoyed the read.Capital Bride
5By Elizabeth 3814The Arthur's creative writing is so beautiful and entertaining. Yes I really enjoyed this story and it was so good to see the emphasis on family life.Bride
3By MaebelluabVery nice story. Good for a quick read. Interesting plot. However the mistakes in grammar took away from that pleasure. Would have been much more enjoyable if these had been corrected.Capital Bride
5By dlda04jcjaEnjoyable read.I loved it
5By Bi dinaSimple and beautiful story. I would add refreshing with no unnecessary drama.It is blessedly short!
1By Janma4A very thin story filled with sloppy mistakes. Don't give up the day job!Good story
4By 11tms69This isa good romance but I found it too short. I would've loved to see the characters grow a little more before the book ended.Wonderful Quick Read
5By Workinglady1234Great story with romance, mystery, and murder. I liked the old west setting.Meh...
2By Rush61Stilted and amateurish writing. The author could use the help of an editor who can get rid of all the fragmented sentences. The too many (and seriously -much too detailed) descriptions of the two main characters having sex seemed an odd contrast to the sort of family-vibe of the story. It's like it's a book about this lovely couple and their little girls but the story was so boring the author felt the need to graphically describe their sexual activity every other page. Ms. Woolfe lost a big opportunity to create a much better storyline and ended up with a cheap, trashy dime novel.Very poorly written.
1By AkuraniI can't even finish this book due to the awkward and clunky writing. The dialogue is so weird, the characters seem stupid because the words coming out of their mouths seem so forced. The plot seems rushed and the author makes no effort to endear the reader to the characters. I would not recommend.
