Most of the women she writes about are strong and intelligent. The main female character uses emotion far more than logic, which just bored and annoyed me. She’s pretty pathetic in my point of view. Guess I know why this one’s so cheap.

There were parts that were good and the overall idea/plot had promise but I was skipping a paragraph per page because the writing was so bizarre. Random dialogue would happen and I’d try and figure out what they were talking about, thinking I’d missed something, but nope it was just awful editing or something. Really wrecked it for me.

Adam needs a book!!!

This was a nice add on to the series and honestly really sweet!

Great story, however terrible editing makes it almost unreadable. Please fix it.

Must read! Check the reading order before diving in!